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Jay-Brook:
I see you love using ALOT of similes in your poems. Your piece was decent. Seemed like you didn't spend that much time on it, but at the same time, tried to stay on your topic. A decent read from you.
TonyTone:
Your piece was not that good. It seemed like you didn't take that much time on it. And at the end, it seemed like you were kind of gettin' off topic. Not a decent read from you.
Vote- Jay-Brook
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