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Old 04-21-07, 10:46 PM   #9
DaTrusHurtz
I Hurt.
 
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I was gonna leave RV...but easy wins like you bought me back.
because nothing in life is free......and your sister taught me that.
uh yea, this punch sucked man. too basic n' played

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An only child, but shit... I'd leave you guessin, I'm bustin this foo
They say I'm sweet & mild, but I'll smash ya, and bring a concussion too
just a statement, where's the creativity?
I play with your brain, beating your head like a percussion instrument
I'd rip you like paper, but like Origami - sonz I'll leave you distraut and bent.
just a threat, no punch here at all

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You a pimp? ha! Jon your girl blow's like candles on a B-day.
so when I see her I'm make sure to whopper like burgers from BK.
yea, this is played n' not that great anyway

Well, all 4 bars here were played, uncreative, and weak. Jonathon didn't even have punches tho and just had statements so for that I'm giving this to Jay.

Vote - Jay
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