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Old 04-23-07, 10:20 PM   #7
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wow kind of weak here.


wasn't really feelin either's punches

Tony-first one, was ok..worded ok, but in general dick lines are played. and weak in my opinion, but the way you followed through with it with the 2nd bar was ok. Although in my opinion the 2nd bar was worded badly. i still got the concept. Weak here, nothin really that stood out.


Big-i've seen you do better then this. i really didn't like ya first punch man, Seems like you tried to hard as far as wording it, and slippin in the concept. 2nd bar was meh as well, not really that great of wordplay. Overall concept was weak as well.


v/tony by a small margin, both dropped weak once again.
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