Ya mom is so stupid, no one even knows that gay heffor.
Funny how she can play dumb, n still not pull a A for effort
coo
Thats pussy's so loose, hit it? shiit, she's not even worth it
I'd auction her off...but the pryce value would be worthless
nahh
She's got so many problems, I'm not sure if a Psyche would cut it dude
Obviously ya not losin weight on the pill, maybe u should try somethin new
wording
The date was s'posed to of been big money, thas all spent on food
When she said we were goin to a drive up..
.....................I didn't know she meant the dollar menu
coo.. cud be worded harder
Yeah that fast shit got her a lil overweight, theres no cuttin back now
Seriously....Is she fuckin standin up, or is she sitting back down
ok
seems like you got some cool cliches in there, you just should work on the connection to the cliche and the punch, its there just not clear enough and could be if you thought harsher.

vs

ya mom was gainin weight so i said lose or leave ho..
well.. i gave her props for tryin...
..but the weight loss pills kept gettin lost in her cheek bones
wording
slut and whore, birth control is a no, u can take her and fuck her..
so his mom got more fuckin babies then chinese dumpsters..
nah
dirty girl she need to lift her shirt up just a bit 'n i wont stress
cause seein her cleavage is like lookin down the valley of death
iight
ive seen ya mom fat flap game and its gettin kinda old...
but wit all them bad hands that been on her.. i was expectin more folds..
ok
ya mom hates sleepin at ur sisters cuz she has a bunk..
but everyday must be a great day..
cuz if she wakes up on the wrong side of the bed she gets stuck
nah
some cool concepts, but then some concepts were kind of bland. the vally of death line probably hit the hardest but i didnt see much harshness from you either...

v/Stubbs.K