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Old 04-24-07, 05:16 PM   #8
Popcorn.
Flyweight
 
Posts: 133
From: Westerville, OH (614)
IP:

Lay:
I'll scar n shred you with no worries I'l leave you scared n whack
But I'll be remembered for rippin KS like I'm fuckin' tearin the map..
^Concept was ok. Nameplay seemed forced. Overall effect of the punch was not good. A bit weak son. 1/5
Ya best line was the one from my sig, n' I dont need a thin gun.
cuz 'kick boxing' ain't a sport.....its what we do after we put u in one
^Very clever concept here. It wasn't too much of a hard hitter but it did it's job. I was feeling this. The overall effect of this punch was good. 2.5/5


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Stubbs:
Layin Fearless, shiiiit. against me, your scare won't ever control fright
I've layed so much fear in this kid, he's gon be impaired his whole life
^Concept was nice. Effect of this punch was decent. 2/5
I'll make you sweat @ the steak, I mean literally you aignt harder to Kill
Ya sigs right........you were a star, until i served you like a bar n grill
^Concept was cool, but this is exactly how Em' said it on 8 Mile so you lose points for that. 0/5




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