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Old 04-24-07, 10:18 PM   #8
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^i thought it rhymed.


Alph-hated ya first punch. shiiit was mad forced. the overall concept was weak. worded horribly. nothin creative very simple. ya 2nd bar...was a lil better but rope lines are played....your wording was ok. nothin too special here from you

Flow-prolly some of the best lines i have seeen from you. good multi usage, and you still managed to word them well. ya best bar was probably ya first. like jay said very creative..2nd one was ok.


v/i got flow takin this.
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