Out-Spoken
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alpha...first punch was whack....i wouldn't even call that a punch..more of a bland statement....your 2nd punch was better, but it still wasn't good...the concept was decent maybe...but the set up and delivery and wording was all wrong..
flow...i liked your first punch...and the 2nd punch was alright...decent metaphor i guess...not up to par with your ability though
my vote goes to flow for dropping better...point blank.
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