jonny...your first had a decent concept...but was worded horribly...

kon...first bar was whack...enough said...it was a weak ass metaphor that went into a punch that didn't diss anyone at all.
your 2nd bar was much better, i still didn't like it a whole lot..just because it wasn't very personal....however..at this point in the battle it's the best bar i've seen.

jonny....your closer was whack...you basically bitched about swaying, when nobody was swaying...and even if it was....there are sooo many ways you could have approached that better...

This vote goes to the person who actually had 1 mediocre punch..and thats kon

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