lay...first punch had an okay concept, could have been worded much better...but still ok i guess.

k....first punch was pretty weak...wasn't feelin it at all..it was an okay attempt at name play i suppose.but didn't connect right
2nd punch.....i don't really know what to say.your first line set up a direct quote from his sig...which is a direct quote from 8 mile...either way....your not going to impress anybody with using lines that arn't yours..regardless of what context it's meant to be in..

lay fear....your closer was the best line of the battle by far...i think it could have been worded slightly better...but to be honest..from what i've seen..this should be one of the top 5's of the week...

vote goes to lay fear for coming harder and connecting harder on both punches...sorry K.

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