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Old 04-25-07, 03:09 PM   #12
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hmm

weak battle

big picture:

you worded your shit poorly. could of came off bigger. but the wording was horrible. sall good though alwayz time to improve. The punch didnt really hit. and that " yeahhahaha" part just ruined your whole first line. So overall i give this 1.5/5

Tony Tone:

your wasnt much better but you edged this out due to an attempt at a clever line. But you shouldn't come at a nigga with callin him a jerk. that word just doesnt diss nobody but yourself. umm the second line was a lil better. overall i give this a 1.9/5

Tony tone gets my vote
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