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Old 04-25-07, 05:18 PM   #3
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lol j kwon? the tipsy nigga?..

anyway..

another chopped and screwed shit...everyone is doing this shit..it's whack now...

verse now, flow is good..apexx made this shit sound hot..no special lyrics...this is aight

hook is whack..over-used..

verse 2...multis good..but that's all u bringin now..u needa switch up to me..delivery is aight..

3rd verse is the better..had a better flow...but wtf at a skinny nigga on top of fat bitch wtf lol...did u even read dat when u wrote that? lol man..anyway..

LOL at outro btw..

overall - flow/multis good..and mixing is dope..AND OUTRO IS HILARIOUS

bad points is lyrics are sloppy...rushed..energy is a lil eh..hook is garbage..

decent..1
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