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Old 04-25-07, 11:12 PM   #9
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Phil

a moma's dirty, an i cant stand the bitch
her breath smells soooo bad she can't help but to talk shit

That's the only thing that made me chuckle.

But, unfortunately, it seems like you took the theme this week too seriously. You have to put wit into your verses. Your bars look like they were copied straight from a website.

Tebo

Ya momma mixed with a blonde would be kinda hot
& damn... if she shaved them legs & mustache, she'de resemble you alot

This ended the battle. Your verse was overall decent. Nothing really stood out but this. You definitely had enough though.


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