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Old 04-26-07, 05:38 PM   #6
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Voted For: GKillaz05

Well dis how it goes...

Rizo Da God:

Your opener was very weak.. which gave me the idea that the rest of your verse wasnt going to be so good.. your punches were to soft, nd you tried to hard to make your lines all hi-tech nd shit and it ended up not in your favor.. There werent to many bars that interested in many, nd ur use of meta's and wordplay was absent

best bar:Im a first rounder like cal johnson for the nfl boi so expext a big league impact…………
So the only G you killin toady is the one in ya name So F you first….
Call it an alphabet set Back…………..

Gkillaz: Your verse wasnt all that either but you probaly didnt need it to be after u saw his.. ur punches were a lil decent, not to much wordplay or metas, i think i may have saw one personal in there... your verse seemed more like a key to me tho

bestbar: Rizo's style has so many holes like a pipe screen...
Only goal your goin' to acomplish is gettin good at typin'...

lol i laffed when i read dat...

but yea killaz gets the vote

~Oz..PZ
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