Wow fuckin weak. Both seriously must improve by week 5.

Sheist-I honestly didn't like the concept of your first bar. The wording was ok, nothin too special at all, the overall punch however was weak. 2nd bar i didn't like much more towards a statement than a hit. Wording was weak..concept wack

Defined-There wasn't even a punch from you. You just basically had 4 lines that rhymed. I wasn't feelin either bar. Basic concepts were weak. nothin good at all. definately work on wording


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