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Old 04-27-07, 02:20 PM   #11
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alright...beat? honestly sounds like some really funny stuff. i could see a silent movie to this beat

verse 1 - flow in the beginnng reminds me of DMX's "Who We Be"...some lines seem a little stretched. do you have a lisp? quality is cool..lyrically it works. nothing special

verse 2 - rhyme scheme is a little odd but its cool so it works..i like how he says hungry..hahaha. so whats the whole concept of this song? i like his energy toward the end of the song.

verse 3 - im lost as to what this song is about..flow is cool..energy really fell off on this verse..quality went down with this verse...i really think this is the worst verse of all 3


overall quality was pretty good throughout..not sure what the topic was because things were kinda just gettin thrown in here and there...not something i would personally listen to..but it wasnt bad at all....
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