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Old 04-28-07, 10:58 AM   #9
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damn, close shit here.


Brandon-1st bar was pretty creative..In general all dick jokes are played as all fuck. But this wasn't worded that badly. nice lil concept.


Thoth-Dude your 1st bar made me laugh for a couple min. that shit was pretty clever regardless if in the end. It turns out thats not how you pronounce it, you diddn't know that. and neither did anyone else that doesn't know B. It still shows creativity. 2nd bar was good as well. i liked the set up, the finish line wasn't really all that impressive. ok, but nothin harsh.

Brandon-kind of the same thing as thoths last bar. First bar was a good set up, but you didn't come harsh enough at the end. I liked the overall concept in ya 2nd bar. but it could have been worded soooooo much doper, and i mean that shit for real son.

v/Thoth. by a small small bit.

Good job here guys.
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