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Old 04-28-07, 11:51 AM   #17
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Voted For: Lay Fear

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Clockworx bar breakdown:


I'm the Lion of this jungle, so prepare to get murked...
If I 'Layed-Fear' you'd be the product of my work...
ahhh...subpar breakdown, i understood what u were tryna say but i guess it dont look as good on paper.. 3/10
So stop rappin', sit down, and take off your blouse...
Cause i'm always down, like the switch in a blind mans house...
That was str8 but u shouldve been more complex with it by connecting both lines better, nd rewording wouldve helped to...5/10
This verse will protect me, If i'm wrong then correct me...
Wear the vest, so that the lead won't infect me...
That was jus str9 up wack...2/10
Take your verse in the paper bag so that you look broke...
Calling you garbage is an understatement like a footnote...
I liked this one a lil better...but the first line made the bar weaker..6/10
So after this battle, sit back and prepare to pray to the lord...
Cause i'll have you seeing colors, like you was in a Guitar Hero chord
Nah...2/10

FINAL SCORE- 18/50


Lay Fear bar breakdown:

Don't talk about your job C, or even think to attempt a hot verse..
Take u 'Outback' n stab ya wit a 'stake, hows' that to test if 'clok worx'
Nice opener, wasnt really feelin to much how it flowed tho, but it was good wordplay...7/10
I'll drop first to eliminate ur insecurity then I'll proceed to demolish it
I'm the first to throw out 'clock'..like im modelin what the ommish did
lol.. ite ite...7/10
Ya godless bitch I'll murder you, its a joke to think u'd be a rizing seed
Cuz clock beatin lay is about as much chance as U.S legalizing weed.
Thats really played and i didnt even like it anyways...4/10
Ya got pointy ears and your a dork I'm devourin and seizin the pure elf
I'd call you a POS.......but how the hell can you be a piece of yourself
a lil played to nd the punch wasnt to strong...5/10
Clock gets crushed n runs away so I stay to rip apart n' roundin the bar
Only way C smashin 'LF' is if his hands pop out n' start poundin the car
yea i get what u was tryna do but it was still wack...4/10

FINAL SCORE- 27/50

Lay Fear gets the vote
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