V/ Exact

Your piece was more aggressive, more intriguing to read than L.E. I liked the introduction of the story, and when the events got wild, you changed the story to the right side of the post in bold. Creative... nice piece

L.E.:
Your piece was decent, but Exact just had the better piece this time. Yours was more poetic, his was more of a topical. Not saying theres anything wrong with being poetic, but if you are, you have to put work harder for the win. More emotion, more content, more complexed lines that makes the reader think. Good job tho

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