I think that your verses got better as it went on your first verse I wasn't really feeling and the flow was off in spots.but overall quality is pretty decent. Iono this should be re-recorded. I think you should go through it again and re-do or cut out the first verse...and you should try to fix the hook up a lil. and then the other verses were pretty good.....flow was better on the other verses...so just change up the hook and the first verse and this would be a nice little banger..

keep it up

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