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Old 05-01-07, 10:55 PM   #8
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No matter what this chump talks, I'm sure Brandon will find doubt
cuz 'paperback' a book?..
...its what he can afford for replacement, after we rip his spine out
^^ kinda stretched.. wasnt feeling it
You can't escape the carnage..I'm a rebel n C' hates to be chokin..
You try to resist the analogy?..shit, 'LAW's' were made to be broken
^^mehh.. good concept but the punch was too elementary

vs.

Weak wordplay won't get you anywhere, quit the charades
I say you're Cool with ladies cause damn you been Bitchen for days
^^alright this was decent
I'd ruin your rep, but there is just nothing to tarnish man
So if anyone was to lay fear...they'd be fuckin a garbage can
^^a played concept worded good

i expected more but you get what u get.. i gotta go with brandon here for a bit more originality.


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