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Old 05-02-07, 10:41 AM   #6
Young Kidd (LM)
Better THAN You!
 
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Eh...it had some nice potential... iliked the beggining flow but afterwards it kinda fell off... its like you quit trying at one point and the choruse could be worked on... its a hoook yea but its kinda repetative even for that...like just the whole feeling is like your just saying it...also work on a little more complexity..i know you can only add so much to certain things but you know put a little wordplay and such...good stuff...stay up..
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