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Old 05-02-07, 07:18 PM   #10
Lungz
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Voted For: GKillaz05

Riz’s Verse


Wit your 60% win ratio I guess facts state im suppose to loose
But im Gorilla killa of 07 wit a 40% chance for my flow to amuse
this bar didn’t really do n e thing for me…just stating opinions and unimportant facts.
You da grandpa of this site so im sure you got da most dick votes……..
So if my dick votes and I cum hard maybe ill get sum good cliff notes…
This would have been a hott bar 7 years ago, played now
65 wins that’s 32 and 11.5 record a year since that G of O5 killa started…
Bet if you tried to get the math I got you’d use ya fingers lookin retarded…
Wording could have been a lot better…you still sticking with this record ish that’s not working…try usin a metta with it..
after this da new scripture reads that g of a killa of O5 has been slain
ya sig dude laid flat wit da knife in his chest sayin aint this sum shit while in pain
Flow was meh and wording was bad again. You need better multies to make longer schemed bars too work…
my words paint pictures so you’re a perfect dealth for an RV First graphical mural….
Even if I put an S after each bar you wouldn’t realize that my punches is plural….(they keep comin)
This so far is your best bar…Whether you should be proud of that or not is not for me to decide, because it really isn’t hard hitting, just decent.
You a dinosaur on this site but toronto don’t hold this raptor….
The end result to this battle is equal to sedams husanes capture……………………….
Meh…you pretty much stated its death…u didn’t say WHO is dying though…which means u need to direct your punches more.
Canada homie, unless steave nash raps that’s basically ya only idol……………………
Call my bullets my kids-so my Suns melt you down so PLAYOFF’s that for survivol….
This is now your best bar…setup is meh because it shows a weak knowledge for Canadians…second bar follows the same theme and goes well.
Im a first rounder like cal johnson for the nfl boi so expext a big league impact…………
So the only G you killin toady is the one in ya name So F you first….
Call it an alphabet set Back…………..
Played closer, I have seen similar used n/p’s like this in the past.



overall, you had 2 bars above average, all the rest at the line or below. To go along with that, only one of the two bars above average was a good blow to the opponent, BUT even it could of used better wording to be brought to the next level.







G’s Verse


I can tell this dude is a bitch from the start of ya verse...
Only time rizo is ever strapped is when carryin his purse...
Only this I have a problem with is slight wording problems in setup, first saying “this dude” then saying “ya”, first it’s as if your describing it to the voters, then u switch it up quickly to blatantly talking to your opponent, which wasn’t on purpose because it doesn’t make literary sense….Played meta aswell.
He never says anything sweet, your soft like a stale pear...
Your punch will never ripin',... so writin' you fail there...
Meh metta in the setup..wording in second line was meh, and I really didn’t see anything hard hitting
Rizo's style has so many holes like a pipe screen...
Only goal your goin' to acomplish is gettin good at typin'...
Comedic bar, nothing special though…me setup and funny but not crazy punch
Your lyrics blow like the wind, so I know who will win...
Thats the only way your flowin' so theres no point is showin...
I see a lot of battlers that use “don’t bother showing” lines on people they think are inferior…its pretty played…setup is played too…



[i]Well, seeing your record I assumed you were the best on this site, but then again going against someone with 59 posts, you would assume u didn’t have to try, so I really don’t know what to believe. But your verse didn’t impress me, most of it was played, though you didn’t come consistent…But played bars don’t win battles…[/b]



VOTE-Honestly….I HAVE to give the win to Riz…A lot of Riz’s bars weren’t good and didn’t even have a metta, let alone even if it would have been played. BUT he did have 2 bars that were above average and caught my attention, whereas I really didn’t see something special from G…so vote goes to riz da god…



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