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Model house entrances, is alot like servin you..I'll bruise n' scare
I'll 'showcase' the door..right after I send him flying through there
^concept was neat. punch itselft was decent. not that hard hitting. 2/5
I'll shred ya to pieces n' place u in a 'basket,balled' and tore up
cuz I'm smashin S.C. to the ground like he fell to the 'floor duh'..
^this wasnt all that good. wasnt feeling it that much. weak concept. punch was blah. 1/5

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Last week boberric fell to me, bitch died before I hit her,
And now I'm about to take top off quicker than a stripper.
^damn. great concept. wording was alright. punch was direct. 2.5/5
Say you'll Showcase the door, that won't send me running dude,
Cause if you threw me through, I'll land soft...kinda like your punches do!
^haha. this was kinda played but seeing as you flipped his concept it came out better. 2/5





Vote = Showcase