Top-your 1st punch was straight. the overall concept was a bit fresh. wording was nice as well. The total harshness was ok. 2nd punch, was a bit too forced, but the wordplay and concept of the punch definately showed potential in you. I just wouldn't never end a punch in duh. that makes it more of a statement rather than a punch


Show-not some of your strongest punches. These in my opinion weren't actually worded that great at all. 1st line was played, but once again had your twist on it, which made it fresh. 2nd punch was again played, but you worded it the best...


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