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Old 05-03-07, 09:44 AM   #8
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^u didn't leave your vote.


Flow-i'm steadily seein you improve in wordplay man, I liked your first bar..the wording was a little bit off, but still pretty descent. harshness was kind of meh though.


Coop-1st bar was definately a good flip, the overall feed was good. concept of the punch just fit in absolutely perfect. harshness was ok. 2nd bar was ok, i actually wasn't really feeling it, pretty played. even with the way you worded it.


Flow-Your 2nd bar, was good as well man. the overall wordplay was ok, but not worded the best. concept was strong. the only problem with this was in was more statementish...


fuck. why yall niggas got it make it so damn difficult lol.
this shits pretty close actually, flow's and coops first bars were strong.
and coops 2nd bar was played, where as flow's was a statement..


shit.


v/Coop...sorry flow
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