a track like this needs a hook....its a message track the message hits harder is better remembered with a hook....i feel like your quality used to be alot worse....both dudes are cool n the voices match well....you sound a lil more polished, he has some spots where he sounds hesitant....nice oldschool feel not a bad track...but i feel its missing something...that something being a hook....nice lyrics n flow n all tho....your on the right path

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