I don't lose
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IP:
a track like this needs a hook....its a message track the message hits harder is better remembered with a hook....i feel like your quality used to be alot worse....both dudes are cool n the voices match well....you sound a lil more polished, he has some spots where he sounds hesitant....nice oldschool feel not a bad track...but i feel its missing something...that something being a hook....nice lyrics n flow n all tho....your on the right path
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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