Kid


Wow thats your punch? Well fuck you yo.. listen bitch, ima own this
I'm not mad at you.. i'm mad at stubbs for giving me this wack ass opponent
Eh, this was weak.
you suck, I have so many lines I could write a book in fact
we all get a kick out of your verse, cuase your punches aint worth looking at
Not much better,


Overall Tony's right. These are both statements. nice rhyme scheme, and potential for dope wordplay, but not punches.


Tony

Let’s take this back to lit. class, now look dip shit
If you’re a pro, there MUST be 40 cons along w/ it
Lol, i liked this.
I know yal lovin it too. Been sooo long n u still cant rap
On the road to greatness but followed an outdated map
Eh, kind of played. Ok.


Overall, ok. Not too harsh, but consistent. possibly lengthen
them up a bit..add a lil more content



V/tony

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