weak.


Kon-too much wordplay in your lines, it really threw them off. Seemed a bit forced, overall concepts were straight though..Harshness of both bars..were eh.. ok
Nothin too special

DaTrus-same with you. Good concepts, but not harsh enough. 1st bar was ok, wording could have been better, but still ok. 2nd bar wasn't as good in my opinion. simple flip. not harsh at all.


V/DaTrus.

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