D's like bathroom activity, he just groans....& stalls..
no doubt ur flop, He's like october, He's known to fall..
^^^ the fall like the season concept is soooo played its close to being retarded to think u could drop and stand a chance agianst anyone. u could of said he's like bunjie jumpers, tits w/o a bra, ahha even a spider on ice skates woulda been a better flip on the fall concept than the regular season play. get creative please
All D's Hip Hop is at "de feet" Fucc rappin, he shulda took dance..
& u know he's a joke,
..........................when he hosts the G.B.A AND STILL CANT ADVANCE..
^^ first dont have wordplay in your first line expetially not a defeat line and if u goin us a defeat line spell it like defeat and word it so people know that your playin it like "da feet", u shouldn't have to use "" and actually spell it out to make your wordplay work. and also i did a defeat line like.. dude hearin dafeat so much he must have speakers in his shoes. and that was at least 2 years ago and even then i was told how played and wack that wordplay was. so yeah, read up. and same with the "GBA", if u gotta explain your punches that much, you absolutely should not use the line cuz it garenteed to be way too forced.

vs.

Ur wack, almost as bad as school shootins n' other shit that i've seen
Lately there's been cause for K.ontroverz.Y...
... to get kicked the fuck outta the league
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yeah simple, but just perfect exicution with the wording and leading into the punch, somethin very very few people in this league know how to do. so this is good just for havin the correct structure which can make any punch at least 5 times as good.
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I can't advance?! I CHAMPED THE FUCKIN LEAGUE u dumb dude
U got so much trouble gettin' facts straight, they wanted to seduce you
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didnt get this one. are u sayin is fact arent str8 and therefore would seduce him?
either way..

vote- trus

for not coming extremely played and knowing the correct format for creating a punch

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