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Old 05-07-07, 01:37 AM   #5
Jay Rose
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ebrics sounds low on the beat...your adlibs ARE off, or maybe just too loud...nice erry thing else tho...2nd guy is smooth...solid verse...pretty nice hope to hear more from him.....like the rhyme scheme on the 3rd buddy, adlibs still off....track overall needs better mixing....otherwise not bad...pretty dope
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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