pretty good man....punches on some lines were a little off....but you stayed on point for the most part....try being more creative with thought though...i notice from reading previous post of yours...its pretty much like the same topic...well your probably freestyling to....for the most part though u are good with punches/metas...multis wordplay and all that great shit....try something new....something different to see what else u can do with writing....~1~