Banned: Biting
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Voted For: GKillaz05
u'r verse was a horrible read so i tryed to brake it up the best i can....
Im Lines R Real,
Ill Eat U Up Like A #9 Burger King Meal /
im guess'iny ou ment MY insted of IM.... weak start thou..
Bacon Cheeseburger,
Im The Owner, Call Me The Burgler
you make no fucking sense kid...
Ur Like A Retard, God Made A Mistake Makin U
And Now Look Whos Rapin U
1st line had potential next weak as fuck...
Back To The Paper, Keep It On Ur Side, Do Good, Otherwise Ull Show Up In A Harbor On The Tide, I Got The Realest, So For The Moment, Enjoy The Ride, Goodnight.
had potential, but led to noting....
I'll snap you quick like a photo...
...Ya your raps are lo-co'z...
Lax's verse always come up short like frodo...
decent start... and so far more then enough to win...
And im the lord of da rap ring, you fold like a napkin...
When your rappin' your never bold even when your cap'n...
preety good punch here... YOU WON..
If you would have seen my verse first you would back down...
Got Lax like "oh wow, everyones goin' to think im wack now"...
weak...
Infact now I'm just chillin' lettin' yall know the facts...
We must be runnin' laps and I passed you so I just re-lax....
below average...
Callin' me out for no reason, well I guess I'll take a free win...
RV Community Complainents is the only place I expect to see him...
true true .... decent ending...
well as you know you did way more then enough to win this....
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