love the beat...like the one two flow....this is a few syllables from being real good some of the lines make it sound amaturish..examples: instead of sayin party until your brain is gone say...right until your brain is gone...you were one syllable off....instead of do it like this say do it up....little things like that....or like when you say have some fun with a bottle of rum it woulda been better to say have some fun grab some rum....its more on structure and will make it all flow better, i can bring up all the ones i notice if you want...otherwise just keep on a lookout for stuff like that

rtf on good morning

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