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Old 05-10-07, 04:35 PM   #9
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Voted For: Lay Fear

Here's how you can tell Fear says whack stuff in his rhymes
even HE's surprised someone wastes their time crushin' his lines!
He wasn't known here, RV didn't even know this kid rhymed
but I just changed all that...
now, you're known as the dude Quotez killed in 10 lines!

vs.

Locations irrelevent dude, u tryin to harm me?..I doubt ya style
cuz if this guy reppin Cinn.,..well I guess I'm straight out the bible
as long as were on the topic..check this..verse is like paintin with ink
cuz if knowledge is all the power of existence...then why ain't he extinct?
lolz..this guys whack, played, weak, unoriginal..so I'll be at fault wit a gun
n' counterattack isn't ya tactic..jus our technique for assualtin you wit one


faime-you shouldnt have taken this with a breez, should always preform your best, never know when somebody is going to out preform you man...well you had a decent verse towards a newb...problem being this newb can actually put together a verse man...i know u can do better...


lay fear-nice verse had some funny bars in there...good introduction to the site...pretty much just better overall verse..

v/lay fear
return the favor ..thanks
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