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Old 05-10-07, 04:38 PM   #2
Jay Rose
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i like the adlibs in the hook but the hook felt a lil fast for the beat....maybe too hype i unno, need to be more lax....this whole joint seems a lil rushed for the beat...i like what your sayin but how you say it with this particualr beat it just doesnt fit....not much else i can say abuot the song except that with a diff beat, or a diff way of spitting it on this beat it would be pretty damn hot.....

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three sad semesters
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