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I don't lose
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IP:
i love this beat, you do it?
killer opening line gets you hooked right in right away
the hookish thing was so so....didnt do justice to the first verse....second verse isnt as quite as good as the first for me...but i like how you ended that verse....
feels like alot of beat left....collab.? if not you did good with expressing the feelings...needs a solid hook, and one more verse maybe....good shit tho
rtf on good morning
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead
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