Eh, i was feelin both of your 1st bars.

Tony 1st bar had a pretty good concept in it. i liked the overall wording as well, not bad. actually havent seen that type of wordplay in a while. harshness wasn't all that high, but some was there. 2nd bar was weak. either i didn't get it, or it was just like i think it was weak attempt.


Datrus- i liked your 1st line as well. good concept wording was ok. 2nd line was also ok, nothin real good but it standed out in a particular way that made me laugh. i don't feel like the wording was that strong though..


v/sorry T but i got Trus on this one as well.

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