IP:
introduce myself? yeah kinda sounds weird
aint heard u in a while..i like the beat so far...
i honestly started laughing when your voice first kicked in..your accent is kinda annoying at times..flow is basically on point..
your breathing is way too loud..it sounds like your suffocating and your gasping for air..work on that
empty space..bores me..do something with that so we know youre coming back in.
lyrically its pretty cool..nothing special.
is this the hook? nah dont like it..or the end whatever part the singin was.
there was no fluctuation or anything in your voice so it sounded kinda weird being the same tone all the way through.
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