intros attention grabbing.
Apmlify your breaths -15 brother, will make the entire track sound alot better. Emotions cool, but to me them breaths are wrecking it. That first is cool. I think this is the hook now, not feeling the flow after the beats break down, its slightly off and in parts it come through very rushed.
Damn get rid a them breaths brother!!!

Oh k now the hook, that singing could be alot better, but i cant hardly hear what your saying, the EQ on singing is alot diffrent to rapping, sounds like you need less Lows and alot more hi's on that singing.
oh, um , ok tracks ended, i guess that would be a solid track to go out on a Cd with.

Overall its cool, just a few things that need adjusting.