wow @ your links dating back about a week..

that laugh thing is lame...HAHAHA @ your "gun" sounds..stop it seriously

the hook..it works. pretty good. just the "get em up" sounds weird.


verse 1 - quality is okay..too much pop though. lyrics suck. but for this song you dont need the greatest lyrics..flow is ok..its just the same throughout so its kinda boring

hook same as i said before

verse 2 - flow is a lot better than before..emotion is pretty good..dont sound as monotonous as u did before. that rich boy line was pretty lame. and u sound way too far away from the mic.