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Originally Posted by Implicit
wow @ your links dating back about a week..
that laugh thing is lame...HAHAHA @ your "gun" sounds..stop it seriously
the hook..it works. pretty good. just the "get em up" sounds weird.
verse 1 - quality is okay..too much pop though. lyrics suck. but for this song you dont need the greatest lyrics..flow is ok..its just the same throughout so its kinda boring
hook same as i said before
verse 2 - flow is a lot better than before..emotion is pretty good..dont sound as monotonous as u did before. that rich boy line was pretty lame. and u sound way too far away from the mic.
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first verse aint me yo, thats my friend. i got the second and begining of the third. but werd, i gotta like have my lips touchin the mic to not sound like that i guess cuz im bout two inches away. and how bout that "i steal so much, i beat the grinch to the who's christmas" line eh eh? haha