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Old 05-17-07, 01:45 PM   #6
M&rk
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diggin the beat and sample for sure. but u sound a lil off beat to me too, that or your just not spittin fast enough to the beat. good story lyrics. kinda nasty if i didnt know it was bout a car. kinda funny concept, came wit some clever lines for the original concept. decent track, too odd for it to be commercial and catchy, doubt thats what u goin for though but werd
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