Returning, the backround vocasl got that original bone sound to it, i like it. Personally I wouldnt use a beat like this.

First verse reminds me of hustle and flow guy... woop that trick get em!!!!
Lyrics are simple but its a commercial track so I guess thats the reason. Second verse is nice and clear, could do with less mids in your EQ and maybe a diffrent compression. Even though the hooks nothing great I like it, the backround vocals are a nice touch to it.

3rd verse again reminds me that cat from hustle and flow.

Infact this entire track reminds me of the tracks of that movie, I guess its the raw underground attempt at some commercial shit.

overall its all good.

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Oh wait, the outro is weird as fuck, wrecked the track IMO.


Note: After I stopped playing this track the girls thats here was singing the backround vocals.