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Old 05-18-07, 02:22 PM   #3
M&rk
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at least thats what the song says.. haha... played like a video game is played.. decent rest of ya verse... chorus is real simple... go get my nine, u played me a fool. u had stomache cramps, we made summer plans.. haha i can feel that. idk about take'n dudes life, but ok. this some jt type beat there at the end ha. should loop the chorus to fade out wit the beat i think. overall, idk, it is what it is
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