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Old 05-18-07, 02:48 PM   #9
Jay Rose
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i like the chanting at the beg...the get em up.....yea i like the hook, but the first verse lacks the emotion needed to make it a hit....the quality is very hallow on the second guy...he sounds like he stood 20 ft from the mic....the 3rd was blah....yea i like the hook i hate the verses....you shoulda done so much better with this.....kinda disapointed...
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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