Quit Freeposting in this battle 2v, don't sway either. Let the votes be votes.



Intense-You seriously need to lengthen your lines, You must add more wordplay. Lines like that just throw me off in a verse. Theres nothing to them. Vocabulary was extremely basic. You have to throw a concept/metaphor/cliche into the punch somehow and make your overall verse harsher. 2v crushed you w/his opener. Sorry bro.

.vs.


I aint tryin' to feed but how can anyone find that this kid is a threat?
Look, I giggled & laughed at the fact you can't write full sentences yet...


^2v, you a bitch. ha!. see you in the finals =>

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