first dude, good presence and quality and flow, all good for this type of beat for sure.
chorus- doesn't stand out enough from dudes verse
second or you- good multis but, make u go off beat a lil at times, have the right hypeness at parts, but for the most part u aint hype enough.
third- not bad, sounds like a he readin a lil, dude sounds like he should slow his flow cuz he can't really stay up wit the beat.
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... not my type of song, but good for what it is rtf

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