listenin...love this sample lol

flows seems like it goin a lil too fast for the beat, it kinda ends before the end of the beats measure/bar...id say either make each line a lil longer, slow down your pace, or add an echo to the end of eas line...lol at makin this shit so serious about a car, lol still dope tho....original....story is on point, overall not bad just work on that flow a bit

could ya rtf homie
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=242282