listenin...
intro is good i like it, kidna bone thuggish
verse 1-good flow, emotion and shit...only thing that might need work is lyrics, throw in at least 1-4 punchlines in that shit
chorus-nice
verse 2-flow is iite, mainstream as hell so of course lyrics need a lil work...still not bad tho, original flow in a few spots
verse 3-best lyrics by far...decent flow but prolly needs more emotion

just fix up the quality yall

rtf
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